Cycleway II - emotive movement words to use as spatial type through the city to encourage people to bike. 3D or 2D? Bright happy colours and a pattern constructed from the image of a bike chain.
Critique - Path system using the onomatapoeia words. Poem is less compelling and a side thing, onomata words connect better with the act of biking. Whoosh stuff between full sentences... narrative journey, whole poem across 3km or however long.
Two Word Combinations that can be read both ways
whizz whoosh/whoosh whizz
ding ding
rattle & clank
click clack/clack click
screech scratch/
pedal & push
whoop de do!
Squeal & scritch
Question of the end point - how to mark it effectively and tie in with the rest of the concept??
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